Have some more fun....
 
Notifications
Clear all

Have some more fun...ANEROS HAIKU CHAIN

Page 3 / 5

rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

artform,

That's cool you did the 'rhyme time' too.

up back's channel springs
earth's and heaven's energies
anus prostate brings

anus prostate brings
pleasure for so many things
play without endings

play without endings
for now suspended in time
our pleasure is prime

our pleasure is prime
this is certainly no crime
for eternity

for eternity
we live with uncertainty
we are also free

we are also free
allowing me to be me
and you to be you


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

artform,

That's cool you did the 'rhyme time' too.

we are also free
allowing me to be me
and you to be you

Friend R! The Rumelian Byronic Haiku is now an established new form of re-enlightenment poetics. Hypnotic, hypnerotic, hypnaeropoetic throbbing, and addictive! 😉 More! Encore!

Having reflected on the Chain as it continues to grow,
it would be wonderful if those who have visited and contributed,
butt find the form too constraining, would keep the Chain growing,
butt feel free to contribute any poetic expressions of their
Aneros journey, hopes, tricks and stimulative imaginations here
in what the emerging page format provides for, OPEN TO ALL,
doggerel or any form, and hereby renames:
[COLOR="red"]ALWAYS
SEARCHING
SIDEBAR

And Oh! for the girls of Nantucket
who carry their tools in their bucket
peridise held within
energies up and in
boys in too as they dock at their locket

limericks, sonnets, free-form,
have at it here men and women all
and at least one haiku too eh!

and you to be you
poetic energies free
resonate you me


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

and you to be you
poetic energies free
resonate you me

resonate you me
we fraction our reaction
pleasure contraction

pleasure contraction
a natural prescription
playful addiction

playful addiction
joining my body and mind
release and unbind

release and unbind
putting frustrations behind
let loving be blind

let loving be blind
journey to satisfaction
pleasure contraction


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@brianadams)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 70
 

pleasure contraction
no volunteering needed
let it come, then moan


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

pleasure contraction
no volunteering needed
let it come, then moan

let it come, then moan
shoulders collaps'd into ribs
head back, howl begins


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

let it come, then moan
shoulders collaps'd into ribs
head back, howl begins

head back, howl begins
mouth drools, eye winks, then he grins
Jabberwocky sins

Jabberwocky sins
"Nonsense, Nonsense" said Alice
"Enter my Palace"

"Enter my Palace"
"tis warm, soft and very cozy"
"no need to mosey"

"no need to mosey"
"life in here is quite rosey"
spoke the White Rabbit

spoke the White Rabbit
because it was his habit
"Oh I'm late, I'm late..."


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

spoke the White Rabbit
because it was his habit
"Oh I'm late, I'm late..."

"Oh I'm late, I'm late...
much better than early eh!!!"
he did celebrate


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

"Oh I'm late, I'm late...
much better than early eh!!!"
he did celebrate

he did celebrate
but he did not masturbate
"Aneros is great..."

"Aneros is great...
there is no reason to wait
for my self to sate!"

"...for my self to sate!"
excited to such a state
do not underrate

do not underrate
your energy and its weight
to change the world's fate

to change the world's fate
is to think in fantasy
think how life could be

think how life could be
when my dreams and fantasy
are reality

are reality
only the things we can see
there is something more

there is something more
to the feelings at our core
adding to our lore

adding to our lore
through space and time we explore
searching more and more

searching more and more
continuing our journey
our reality


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@nurselady)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 95
 

I'm not nearly as well versed in your Haiku and poems as so many of you, but here goes...............

Our Reality
is learning from each other
a welcome surprise


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

I'm not nearly as well versed in your Haiku and poems as so many of you, but here goes...............

Our Reality
is learning from each other
a welcome surprise

Welcome dear nurselady!! 😀 😀

Your first haiku here is a beaut!
Perfect 5-7-5 and taking the last previous line as your first.
You have it all. You are most welcome here!
Freely explore these possibilities here as you see them please!

a welcome surprise
a new chainer's set of eyes
captures core well eh


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

artform,

You beat me to a response to 'nurselady's Haiku!

nurselady,

This is all just for the FUN of it! The rules are simple, the form is simple, poetic experience is not necessary, just let your mind flow, let the interpretations emerge later. Thanks for joining our 'chain' gang.

a welcome surprise
a new chainer's set of eyes
captures core well eh

captures core well eh
he doth say and we do play
in magical skies

in magical skies
like bird on wing my soul flies
a welcome surprise

a welcome surprise
she saw with soulful warm eyes
so gentle and wise

so gentle and wise
heartfelt nurturing she tries
her loving applies

her loving applies
she has bestowed the grand prize
shedding her disguise


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@nurselady)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 95
 

Okay men, here goes..............

Shedding her disguise
She blushes and stares softly
Satisfaction met


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

Shedding her disguise
She blushes and stares softly
Satisfaction met

Satisfaction met
purring like a pampered pet
enjoying being

enjoying being
my inner self is seeing
an expansive view

an expansive view
always leading back to you
my world is fulfilled


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

an expansive view
always leading back to you
my world is fulfilled

my world is fulfilled
now my prostate has been thrilled
as aneros drilled

as aneros drilled
tantric training was fulfilled
wheels off yet not spilled

wheels off yet not spilled
all my energies are thrilled
healing too fulfilled

healing too fulfilled
universal union stilled
all these dreams re-skilled

all these dreams re-skilled
all the energies instilled
now we've joined the guild

now we've joined the guild
by the path that can't be willed
universal love


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

now we've joined the guild
by the path that can't be willed
universal love

universal love
floats on the wings of a dove
visions from above

visions from above
matching visions from within
pleasures we begin

pleasures we begin
as Aneros makes us grin
surely not a sin

surely not a sin
a Saints rapture is our twin
Heaven we can win

Heaven we can win
over and over again
so let us begin

so let us begin
a journey to ecstasy
just insert gently

just insert gently
your key to eternity
and set yourself free


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
 hula
(@hula)
Reputable Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 233
 

and set yourself free
words for frustrated newbie
do nothing method


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@myturn)
Reputable Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 435
 

and set yourself free
words for frustrated newbie
do nothing method

Do nothing method,
The Aneros does nothing,
Why d'I buy this thing?


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@myturn)
Reputable Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 435
 

Do nothing method,
The Aneros does nothing,
Why d'I buy this thing?

I'll acheive that O,
It will be Super - like Gold,
Before I get old.


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

MyTurn, you forgot to connect your two Haiku's following the established format, so I'll offer a filler.

Do nothing method,
The Aneros does nothing,
Why'd I buy this thing?

Why'd I buy this thing?
'cause it lets my body sing
I'll achieve that O

I'll achieve that O,
It will be Super - like Gold,
Before I get old.

Before I get old
may I always be so bold
just to have MyTurn

just to have MyTurn
drink from pleasure's golden urn
continuing to learn


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@myturn)
Reputable Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 435
 

Thanks Ru, you saved my ....um, ass.

Before I get old
may I always be so bold
just to have MyTurn

just to have MyTurn
drink from pleasure's golden urn
continuing to learn

Continuing to learn,
MGX pays so I earn,
I await payday.


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

Continuing to learn,
MGX pays so I earn,
I await payday.

I await payday
that is always a fun day
roll in the hay day

roll in the hay day
so much more there is to say
wish for time to play

wish for time to play
makes us yearning for the day
of sun's warming ray

of sun's warming ray
and our journey is underway
more there is to say


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

Welcome back hula!! Welcome MyTurn!! Great reweaving rumel!! 😀 😀 😀 😀

You guys are great! The more you come here, the easier the haiku flow. Flow frequently here guys and gals.

of sun's warming ray
and our journey is underway
more there is to say

more there is to say
written as journey's journal
ecstasies within


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@myturn)
Reputable Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 435
 

Thanks for the welcome, artform.

more there is to say
written as journey's journal
ecstasies within

ecstasies within,
that is my desire,
oh, to rewire.


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
 hula
(@hula)
Reputable Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 233
 

Thanks for the welcome, artform.

ecstasies within,
that is my desire,
oh, to rewire.

Oh, to rewire
learn to control the muscles
'til they control you


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

Hey Guys, we got an ooops here, remember the rules?

Simple rules/form:
1. three lines, five syllables first line, seven syllables second line, five syllables third line:
5-7-5
2. You must take the last line of the previous haiku, and must use that as the first line of yours. That makes the chain and can generate some of the fun!
3. Take the topic wherever it/you lead and sometimes that may inspire you to more than one haiku per post still following the above rules.
4. Helpful best form is to quote the previous haiku at the top of your post.

five, seven and five
syllables for which we strive
Haiku kept alive

Oh,...???
learn to control the muscles
'til they control you

'til they control you
thrill you, shake you, through and through
feel yourself renewed

feel yourself renewed
you may look a little lewd
playing in the nude

playing in the nude
to strangers may appear crude
lovers are more shrewd

lovers are more shrewd
to be acting like some prude
is the height of rude!


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

Thanks for the welcome, artform.

ecstasies within,
that is my desire,
oh, to rewire.

You are most welcome MyTurn!

Just a friendly reminder to test each of your haiku to see if they fit the 5-7-5 form we use here. For example, you may need a few added syllables or words as with your current one, a great expression of your feelings, as I humbly offer here:

ecstasies within
oh how that is my desire
how now to rewire?

That would then give hula a full 5 unit last line instead of the 4 units of your version. Don't be discouraged, just remember to do the check for 5-7-5 before posting.

all the best listening and learning all along the way all

artform


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

lovers are more shrewd
to be acting like some prude
is the height of rude

is the height of rude
gawking at a blissful dude's
playful state of nude?

playful state of nude
on an appropriate beach
white handles protrude

white handles protrude
like ipod's white earbuds' wires
brands your cheeks' desires

brands your cheeks' desires
sunburn's spiral shadow says
I LOVE ANEROS

EDIT: PATCHING When I first saw your post R!, it ended with "is the height of rude"; therefore the above. When I posted my reply above your post had the additional lines ending in "memories so small".

Therefore, with apologies :D:

I LOVE ANEROS
it takes me beyond any
memories so small

memories so small
meanings so universal
imagination

imagination
memory and reason All
Jefferson proclaimed

Jefferson proclaimed
having travelled forth in time
I LOVE ANEROS

Note: Thomas Jefferson, organized his Library in three main categories: Memory, Reason, Imagination. Thus the Library of Congress. Still works for me, even in these ecstatic practices and pursuing their science/reason after the fact.

artform


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

artform,

I am sorry for the confusion, I had some further thoughts after I originally posted, so I went ahead and just added to my post, which was evidently at the same time as your posting. It probably won't happen again. I edited out those extra stanzas so your post can remain intact, I'll work those additional lines in here.

Jefferson proclaimed
having travelled forth in time
I LOVE ANEROS

I LOVE ANEROS
How can plastic move me so
moves me to and fro

moves me to and fro
moves me, grooves me, fast and slow
mysteries to know

mysteries to know
body understands the flow
ego can not go

ego can not go
it is body's pleasure show
like fiddle and bow

like fiddle and bow
Aneros and body play
music all the day

music all the day
'wasteful" some prude dares to say
tis the height of rude!

tis the height of rude?
endured by every dude
screwed, stewed, blued and chewed

screwed, stewed, blued and chewed
we rise again o'er it all
like smoke in the Fall

like smoke in the Fall
musty leaves, an old baseball
memories so small


   
ReplyQuote
Avatar for Author
(@artform)
Member Adventurer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1474
Topic starter  

like smoke in the Fall
musty leaves, an old baseball
memories so small

Great R! Now the chain is double-loopy and infinitely so!! 😀 😀 How orgasmic can it get!?!

memories so small
oh how can they hold it all?
always we renew

always we renew
life's great powers through and through
felt orgasmic'ly

felt orgasmic'ly
wood smoke, ripe pear, emmental
chaos chemistry

chaos chemistry
sunset fire and warm prostate
felt aesthetic'ly

felt aesthetic'ly
complex body harmonies
felt orgasmic'ly


   
ReplyQuote
rumel
(@rumel)
Illustrious Member Customer
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 4077
 

felt aesthetic'ly
complex body harmonies
felt orgasmic'ly

felt orgasmic'ly
felt intellectually
felt so lovingly

felt so lovingly
wonderfully soulfully
and playfully free

and playfully free
Aneros comfortably
within teases me

within teases me
tickles, strokes and pleases me
so naturally

so naturally
do our bodies know this urge
feelings do emerge


   
ReplyQuote
Page 3 / 5
Share:
Skip to toolbar