artform,
That's cool you did the 'rhyme time' too.
up back's channel springs
earth's and heaven's energies
anus prostate brings
anus prostate brings
pleasure for so many things
play without endings
play without endings
for now suspended in time
our pleasure is prime
our pleasure is prime
this is certainly no crime
for eternity
for eternity
we live with uncertainty
we are also free
we are also free
allowing me to be me
and you to be you
artform,
That's cool you did the 'rhyme time' too.
we are also free
allowing me to be me
and you to be you
Friend R! The Rumelian Byronic Haiku is now an established new form of re-enlightenment poetics. Hypnotic, hypnerotic, hypnaeropoetic throbbing, and addictive! 😉 More! Encore!
Having reflected on the Chain as it continues to grow,
it would be wonderful if those who have visited and contributed,
butt find the form too constraining, would keep the Chain growing,
butt feel free to contribute any poetic expressions of their
Aneros journey, hopes, tricks and stimulative imaginations here
in what the emerging page format provides for, OPEN TO ALL,
doggerel or any form, and hereby renames:
[COLOR="red"]ALWAYS
SEARCHING
SIDEBAR
And Oh! for the girls of Nantucket
who carry their tools in their bucket
peridise held within
energies up and in
boys in too as they dock at their locket
limericks, sonnets, free-form,
have at it here men and women all
and at least one haiku too eh!
and you to be you
poetic energies free
resonate you me
and you to be you
poetic energies free
resonate you me
resonate you me
we fraction our reaction
pleasure contraction
pleasure contraction
a natural prescription
playful addiction
playful addiction
joining my body and mind
release and unbind
release and unbind
putting frustrations behind
let loving be blind
let loving be blind
journey to satisfaction
pleasure contraction
pleasure contraction
no volunteering needed
let it come, then moan
pleasure contraction
no volunteering needed
let it come, then moan
let it come, then moan
shoulders collaps'd into ribs
head back, howl begins
let it come, then moan
shoulders collaps'd into ribs
head back, howl begins
head back, howl begins
mouth drools, eye winks, then he grins
Jabberwocky sins
Jabberwocky sins
"Nonsense, Nonsense" said Alice
"Enter my Palace"
"Enter my Palace"
"tis warm, soft and very cozy"
"no need to mosey"
"no need to mosey"
"life in here is quite rosey"
spoke the White Rabbit
spoke the White Rabbit
because it was his habit
"Oh I'm late, I'm late..."
spoke the White Rabbit
because it was his habit
"Oh I'm late, I'm late..."
"Oh I'm late, I'm late...
much better than early eh!!!"
he did celebrate
"Oh I'm late, I'm late...
much better than early eh!!!"
he did celebrate
he did celebrate
but he did not masturbate
"Aneros is great..."
"Aneros is great...
there is no reason to wait
for my self to sate!"
"...for my self to sate!"
excited to such a state
do not underrate
do not underrate
your energy and its weight
to change the world's fate
to change the world's fate
is to think in fantasy
think how life could be
think how life could be
when my dreams and fantasy
are reality
are reality
only the things we can see
there is something more
there is something more
to the feelings at our core
adding to our lore
adding to our lore
through space and time we explore
searching more and more
searching more and more
continuing our journey
our reality
I'm not nearly as well versed in your Haiku and poems as so many of you, but here goes...............
Our Reality
is learning from each other
a welcome surprise
I'm not nearly as well versed in your Haiku and poems as so many of you, but here goes...............
Our Reality
is learning from each other
a welcome surprise
Welcome dear nurselady!! 😀 😀
Your first haiku here is a beaut!
Perfect 5-7-5 and taking the last previous line as your first.
You have it all. You are most welcome here!
Freely explore these possibilities here as you see them please!
a welcome surprise
a new chainer's set of eyes
captures core well eh
artform,
You beat me to a response to 'nurselady's Haiku!
nurselady,
This is all just for the FUN of it! The rules are simple, the form is simple, poetic experience is not necessary, just let your mind flow, let the interpretations emerge later. Thanks for joining our 'chain' gang.
a welcome surprise
a new chainer's set of eyes
captures core well eh
captures core well eh
he doth say and we do play
in magical skies
in magical skies
like bird on wing my soul flies
a welcome surprise
a welcome surprise
she saw with soulful warm eyes
so gentle and wise
so gentle and wise
heartfelt nurturing she tries
her loving applies
her loving applies
she has bestowed the grand prize
shedding her disguise
Okay men, here goes..............
Shedding her disguise
She blushes and stares softly
Satisfaction met
Shedding her disguise
She blushes and stares softly
Satisfaction met
Satisfaction met
purring like a pampered pet
enjoying being
enjoying being
my inner self is seeing
an expansive view
an expansive view
always leading back to you
my world is fulfilled
an expansive view
always leading back to you
my world is fulfilled
my world is fulfilled
now my prostate has been thrilled
as aneros drilled
as aneros drilled
tantric training was fulfilled
wheels off yet not spilled
wheels off yet not spilled
all my energies are thrilled
healing too fulfilled
healing too fulfilled
universal union stilled
all these dreams re-skilled
all these dreams re-skilled
all the energies instilled
now we've joined the guild
now we've joined the guild
by the path that can't be willed
universal love
now we've joined the guild
by the path that can't be willed
universal love
universal love
floats on the wings of a dove
visions from above
visions from above
matching visions from within
pleasures we begin
pleasures we begin
as Aneros makes us grin
surely not a sin
surely not a sin
a Saints rapture is our twin
Heaven we can win
Heaven we can win
over and over again
so let us begin
so let us begin
a journey to ecstasy
just insert gently
just insert gently
your key to eternity
and set yourself free
and set yourself free
words for frustrated newbie
do nothing method
and set yourself free
words for frustrated newbie
do nothing method
Do nothing method,
The Aneros does nothing,
Why d'I buy this thing?
Do nothing method,
The Aneros does nothing,
Why d'I buy this thing?
I'll acheive that O,
It will be Super - like Gold,
Before I get old.
MyTurn, you forgot to connect your two Haiku's following the established format, so I'll offer a filler.
Do nothing method,
The Aneros does nothing,
Why'd I buy this thing?
Why'd I buy this thing?
'cause it lets my body sing
I'll achieve that O
I'll achieve that O,
It will be Super - like Gold,
Before I get old.
Before I get old
may I always be so bold
just to have MyTurn
just to have MyTurn
drink from pleasure's golden urn
continuing to learn
Thanks Ru, you saved my ....um, ass.
Before I get old
may I always be so bold
just to have MyTurnjust to have MyTurn
drink from pleasure's golden urn
continuing to learn
Continuing to learn,
MGX pays so I earn,
I await payday.
Continuing to learn,
MGX pays so I earn,
I await payday.
I await payday
that is always a fun day
roll in the hay day
roll in the hay day
so much more there is to say
wish for time to play
wish for time to play
makes us yearning for the day
of sun's warming ray
of sun's warming ray
and our journey is underway
more there is to say
Welcome back hula!! Welcome MyTurn!! Great reweaving rumel!! 😀 😀 😀 😀
You guys are great! The more you come here, the easier the haiku flow. Flow frequently here guys and gals.
of sun's warming ray
and our journey is underway
more there is to say
more there is to say
written as journey's journal
ecstasies within
Thanks for the welcome, artform.
more there is to say
written as journey's journal
ecstasies within
ecstasies within,
that is my desire,
oh, to rewire.
Thanks for the welcome, artform.
ecstasies within,
that is my desire,
oh, to rewire.
Oh, to rewire
learn to control the muscles
'til they control you
Hey Guys, we got an ooops here, remember the rules?
Simple rules/form:
1. three lines, five syllables first line, seven syllables second line, five syllables third line:
5-7-5
2. You must take the last line of the previous haiku, and must use that as the first line of yours. That makes the chain and can generate some of the fun!
3. Take the topic wherever it/you lead and sometimes that may inspire you to more than one haiku per post still following the above rules.
4. Helpful best form is to quote the previous haiku at the top of your post.
five, seven and five
syllables for which we strive
Haiku kept alive
Oh,...???
learn to control the muscles
'til they control you
'til they control you
thrill you, shake you, through and through
feel yourself renewed
feel yourself renewed
you may look a little lewd
playing in the nude
playing in the nude
to strangers may appear crude
lovers are more shrewd
lovers are more shrewd
to be acting like some prude
is the height of rude!
Thanks for the welcome, artform.
ecstasies within,
that is my desire,
oh, to rewire.
You are most welcome MyTurn!
Just a friendly reminder to test each of your haiku to see if they fit the 5-7-5 form we use here. For example, you may need a few added syllables or words as with your current one, a great expression of your feelings, as I humbly offer here:
ecstasies within
oh how that is my desire
how now to rewire?
That would then give hula a full 5 unit last line instead of the 4 units of your version. Don't be discouraged, just remember to do the check for 5-7-5 before posting.
all the best listening and learning all along the way all
artform
lovers are more shrewd
to be acting like some prude
is the height of rude
is the height of rude
gawking at a blissful dude's
playful state of nude?
playful state of nude
on an appropriate beach
white handles protrude
white handles protrude
like ipod's white earbuds' wires
brands your cheeks' desires
brands your cheeks' desires
sunburn's spiral shadow says
I LOVE ANEROS
EDIT: PATCHING When I first saw your post R!, it ended with "is the height of rude"; therefore the above. When I posted my reply above your post had the additional lines ending in "memories so small".
Therefore, with apologies :D:
I LOVE ANEROS
it takes me beyond any
memories so small
memories so small
meanings so universal
imagination
imagination
memory and reason All
Jefferson proclaimed
Jefferson proclaimed
having travelled forth in time
I LOVE ANEROS
Note: Thomas Jefferson, organized his Library in three main categories: Memory, Reason, Imagination. Thus the Library of Congress. Still works for me, even in these ecstatic practices and pursuing their science/reason after the fact.
artform
artform,
I am sorry for the confusion, I had some further thoughts after I originally posted, so I went ahead and just added to my post, which was evidently at the same time as your posting. It probably won't happen again. I edited out those extra stanzas so your post can remain intact, I'll work those additional lines in here.
Jefferson proclaimed
having travelled forth in time
I LOVE ANEROS
I LOVE ANEROS
How can plastic move me so
moves me to and fro
moves me to and fro
moves me, grooves me, fast and slow
mysteries to know
mysteries to know
body understands the flow
ego can not go
ego can not go
it is body's pleasure show
like fiddle and bow
like fiddle and bow
Aneros and body play
music all the day
music all the day
'wasteful" some prude dares to say
tis the height of rude!
tis the height of rude?
endured by every dude
screwed, stewed, blued and chewed
screwed, stewed, blued and chewed
we rise again o'er it all
like smoke in the Fall
like smoke in the Fall
musty leaves, an old baseball
memories so small
like smoke in the Fall
musty leaves, an old baseball
memories so small
Great R! Now the chain is double-loopy and infinitely so!! 😀 😀 How orgasmic can it get!?!
memories so small
oh how can they hold it all?
always we renew
always we renew
life's great powers through and through
felt orgasmic'ly
felt orgasmic'ly
wood smoke, ripe pear, emmental
chaos chemistry
chaos chemistry
sunset fire and warm prostate
felt aesthetic'ly
felt aesthetic'ly
complex body harmonies
felt orgasmic'ly
felt aesthetic'ly
complex body harmonies
felt orgasmic'ly
felt orgasmic'ly
felt intellectually
felt so lovingly
felt so lovingly
wonderfully soulfully
and playfully free
and playfully free
Aneros comfortably
within teases me
within teases me
tickles, strokes and pleases me
so naturally
so naturally
do our bodies know this urge
feelings do emerge